“Trust” Haiku #7

“Trust” Haiku #7
By Jennifer Kiley
trans-graphics by j. kiley
12.07.12
December Month of the Haiku 31 days 31 haiku #7

alimenter le cercle by j. kiley
© Jennifer Kiley 2012

se fier prudemment by j. kiley
© Jennifer Kiley 2012


Saint-Saens-Danse Macabre Symphonic Poem in G minor Op. 40

5 thoughts on ““Trust” Haiku #7

  1. “Relationships are mysterious. We doubt the positive qualities in others, seldom the negative. You will say to your partner: do you really love me? Are you sure you love me? You will ask this a dozen times and drive the person nuts. But you never ask: are you really mad at me? Are you sure you’re angry? When someone is angry, you don’t doubt it for a moment. Yet the reverse should be true. We should doubt the negative in life, and have faith in the positive.” ~ Christopher Pike, Remember Me ~

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    • Thank you Niamh, it is high praise. I find writing Haiku very challenging. Words hold onto their strengths. There’s a need to be concise. I need to work on the longer poems to bring them in closer and make them tighter. Find the point with fewer words. Your support means a great deal. a.l. J.K.

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